IDEAS 3: Journeyman clone

Possible scene 1 - jogging scene

• protagonist jogging (GorPro footage?)
• don't show face immediately - just body parts for narrative enigma
• panting sounds getting louder
• shots of car wheels driving on road
• man jogging gets hit by car - cut to black, tires screeching, sound of car horn
• possible car horn sound changes into heart monitor sound
• maybe contact driving company and ask if we can use an already crashed car
• fake airbags
• Driver could be used for binary opposition

Could cross cut these scenes to build the tension
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Possible scene 2 - tennis coaching session

• Protagonist is training for tennis competition (inside court for good sound?)
• could pan over poster/sign-up sheet for competition (exposition)
• coach could be shouting at protagonist ('you'll never be ready for the competition at this rate')
• shouting gets more intense, sound of tennis balls gets louder
• tension building

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Possible scene 3 - partner packing/leaving

• Tennis player's partner packing in the living room of house/apartment
• don't show face immediately
• photos of tennis player on the walls/dresser/next to trophies
• partner picks up photos and puts them down again (over-the-shoulder shot)
• photos of protagonist with team
• maybe go over dent on wall (signify domestic abuse)
• leaving house with bags
• takes key off keyring and its through letterbox
• maybe make-up bruise on face (make-up)
• putting on sunglasses to hide it

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Possible scene 4 - hospital room/bed

• tennis player wakes up in hospital room
• POV shot, blurry, blink effect
• sees nurse/doctor in outfit
• try and get actual hospital room, if not then only POV shots