Showing posts with label sample scene. Show all posts
Showing posts with label sample scene. Show all posts

Thursday, 4 April 2019

EVALUATION QUESTION 3 production skills

How did your production skills develop throughout this project?

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What I cover in this post:

  • Web series made on how to use FCPX, showing development over time
  • descriptions of how we improved over preliminary exercises and sample scenes
  • summaries of the issues we faced and how we developed our skills to overcome them (casing issues, acting, time)
  • set dressing advances
  • BTS showing our director skills improving

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Creative use of technologies:

For creative use of technologies, I made a web series on FCPX TechTips, in the form of a youtube tutorial series:

Episode 1

This is a demonstration of how our initial basic editing was done using FCPX

  • importing footage from a portable hard drive
  • creating libraries, events and projects
  • inserting clips to the timeline
  • cutting, detaching audio, other basics
  • saving 
  • publishing to the web


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Episode 2

When we started editing more scenes we used some more advanced effects

  • inserting Foley sound
  • sound effects
  • transitions (cut to black, fade to black)
  • audiobridge
  • music


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Episode 3

When I filmed my evaluation question 2 creative 'who wants to be a millionaire' I used a green screen and needed to se even more technical effects in FCPX
  • green screen
  • screen recording
  • keyer
  • position of clips
  • layering

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Episode 4

Whilst editing another rough cut, I had some difficulty with adding transitions to titles in FCPX
  • adding titles to a project
  • font and size
  • blade tool (short cuts)
  • cmd + Z
  • transitions (in and out)
  • making transitions work on only titles


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Preliminary Exercise

One of the earliest productions we worked on was a preliminary exercise in continuity editing. Our early production skills were very basic, and this was an introduction to more ways in which we can create meaning in a text using different editing, directing, camera and acting techniques


Task
Practice continuity editing by filming someone walking down a corridor, entering a room and interacting with someone in it



Techniques we practiced using
  • shot reverse shot
  • match on action
  • 180 degree rule
  • whip pan
  • focus push
  • panning shot
  • tilt
  • basic lighting techniques
  • we also made a brief shot list
  • dutch angle

What we didn't have
  • call sheet
  • script
  • tripod/monopod
  • dolly
  • props
  • stabiliser
  • microphone 
  • mood board

What I learned 
  • body language is as important as dialogue
  • director needs to be clear/may need to demonstrate
  • shot lists make it easier
  • shooting in reverse order 
  • continuity (eg turning out lights) must be payed attention to
  • how to use manual focus
  • get lots of footage (often of the same scene) from different angles/distances
  • always try and jump at least 2 shot distances (eg extreme long shot to close up), other wise it looks like a continuity error
  • see what footage looks like with and without lighting
  • a script would be helpful

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Continuous editing v. Discontinuity editing
Continuity editing uses techniques which immerse the audience in the media text, make it smooth and show events as they happen in chronological order. Discontinuity editing however makes the audience acutely aware that they are watching an artificial text which has been constructed, and uses techniques such as jump cuts and the breaking of the 180 degree rule which take away from audience immersion.
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Early sample scenes

Our first sample scene was very short, it was of our protagonist jogging and playing tennis.
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How our technical skills developed:
  • a lot of footage was shaky - thought to bring a stabiliser next time we would film
  • for more shot variety, use a GoPro to get POV shots of the protagonist (using accessories to attach it to his head)
  • get more shots and more shot variety next time
  • record sound of things like panting and feet running whilst there for verisimilitude
  • get even more involved as a director to show how you want things to happen - the running in this scene is very unrealistic
  • bring a shot list/call sheet for future shoots
  • think of things you could do once you're their - e.g. getting some training shots of him warming up would have added to verisimilitude
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Our second sample scene was shot inside, which brought more issues with it. This is the scene where the protagonist's partner (Cathy) is leaving him.


Issues:
  • the hand opening the cupboard has lots of short takes, so fast that you can't really make out what is happening, and it takes away from audience immersion because its so disorienting
  • include a master shot or ELS
  • shots of the partner leaving and getting in the car would help with verisimilitude 
  • nowhere near enough set dressing, the space in the room wasn't used nearly enough
  • Mise-en-scene missing:
    • include tennis equipment in the background (racket, bag, water bottle)
    • passport (shot of it being put in the bag)
    • photos of the couple together and the team (have partner pick them up then put them down again, angrily)
    • panning shots of props
    • in wardrobe have clear split of his/her side
    • have a larger suitcase, get a shot of Cathy grabbing everything from one side of the wardrobe and putting it in the suitcase
  • There were still issues with directing, so more demonstration was needed next time
Progress since the last sample scene:
  • This time we brought a call sheet and shot list
  • we used a stabiliser for the panning shots
  • we improvised some of the shots looking at the space we had and thinking of ways to be more creative in it
  • a lot more shot variety to choose from in editing
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Later sample scenes


This is the 2nd attempt at filming the scene where the tennis player's partner (Cathy) is leaving him.

 
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Progress since the last attempt:

  • There was much more involvement as a director, demonstrating to the actress what I wanted her to do
  • even more shot variety was used
  • a call sheet and shot list was used
  • much more set dressing:
    • tennis equipment is placed throughout the room
    • photos of the couple and the tennis team have been added for verisimilitude
    • female beauty products and jewellery were placed on the surface in front of the mirror
    • stereotypically female books were placed on one side of the bed, and stereotypically male ones on the other
    • the wardrobe was changed so that there is a clear divide between men's and women's clothes
    • a larger suitcase that is more realistic for a permanent move
  • manual focus was used in some shots (varying focus push/pull)
  • There were no overwhelmingly disorienting short takes
Issues:
  • There are sound issues with this sample scene
  • slight continuity error - the hand pauses on the cupboard door 
  • The lighting was difficult to work with, but there wasn't any more we could do to improve it
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Flexibility and Overcoming Issues Faced

one of the key skills I had to work on throughout the production was flexibility: actors cancelled on shoots a lot, the weather was sometimes bad so filming had to be pushed back repeatedly. We had to find ways to overcome these difficulties.

Cast and Filming:

  • Originally the partner of the protagonist was going to be another man, because we wanted to include non-heteronormative representation, taking influence from films like My Beautiful Laundrette, or Withnail and I. But because we had already cast the protagonist and filmed several scenes with him, it would be practically too difficult to reshoot these all again with a different actor, as he did not want play the role if the character wasn't heterosexual. We had to change the casting of the partner to a female, because we had not filmed any scenes with them yet.

  • with the actress initially playing the role of the partner, there were issues with following direction, and said she felt uncomfortable on camera, despite agreeing to film. This lead to a cast change, and a reshoot, which was frustrating, but definitely the right decision as the second attempt at filming the packing scene was far more successful than the first.

  • Sometimes the actors had trouble following direction: in the car crash scene, we had to reshoot the protagonist's reaction countless times, demonstrating repeatedly the way he should react without making it look too fake or awkward. After about 45 minutes of this, we decided to change the shot to a close-up reaction, and showing the car wheels stopping suddenly.

  • For the hospital scene, we asked the nurses at our school if we could film in their office, and they were really helpful and enthusiastic, offering to bring in their old work clothes and move the beds around the room. They also helped us edit the script to make it sound more medically accurate. But filming in the school nurse office was difficult, as at lunch times we had to repeatedly cancel because it was too full, but we eventually filmed after school.

Set dressing:
  • at the start we forgot to bring in bits of costume and set dressing, which took away from verisimilitude
  • to overcome this we made detailed plans for each shoot (linked below)
  • One of the prime examples of this is the set dressing in the packing scene:
    • initially there was barely any set dressing, when we re-filmed we added (for verisimilitude):
      • female beauty products on the dresser
      • a clear divide between men's and women's clothes in the wardrobe
      • photos of the main couple, and Tanay's tennis team
      • tennis equipment throughout the room
      • a larger suitcase (so it looked like she was actually leaving)
        Early sample scene - lack of detail in set dressing
        Final cut - clear divide between male and female wardrobe,
         shows they are living together and she is leaving

Health and safety:
  • because one of our scenes involves a car crash we had to make risk assessments to avoid injury
  • To make sure no one actually got hit by a car, we made clear markers on the road for where the jogger should stop, and where the car should. The car wasn't going faster than 10km/h. If an accident were to occur, the nearest hospital was a 10 minute drive away, as a safety net.
  • seatbelts were worn at all times
  • there were no injuries or accidents which occurred
The Facebook Groupchat
Other:

  • General confidence was a real issue for me at the start of this journey, but as I did more research and practices confidence grew. In the first few months I had difficulty with editing vodcasts because of this confidence issue, but as we made more sample scenes and we could see our own improvement my confidence grew and I became more able to direct actors effectively and edit vodcasts/podcasts
  • Early camera skills were really shaky, and a lot of footage had issues with focus/shake, but as we got more confident with the hardware this improved (more on this in evaluation question 4)
  • Group communication was an early issue, but using social media (facebook messenger) we got more involved in sharing ideas through calls and messages, and a group chat was made with the whole cast in it so that we could make sure everyone had all the information they needed (including costume, time/place, scripts etc.)

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BTS
We made behind the scenes videos for some shoots to show evidence of directing. As time goes on our directing skills improved as we became more clear in our descriptions and demonstrations for the actors


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(SAM'S WORK)
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This is Sam's creative use of technologies covering the same topic
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SAMPLE SCENE training 2



This is our second attempt at filming the tennis training scene (link to first sample scene here)
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Changes

  • Coach
    • we added the character of the coach to this one, for verisimilitude, 
    • but also to appeal to a secondary older target audience
  • Script
    • we added dialogue so there is more semblance of a plot
    • this also adds to verisimilitude
  • More shots
    • we got way more shots this time for variety, and because it comes close to being an action scene we want fast-paced editing, with lots of short takes
    • we also got shots of Tanay warming up
  • Shots of the building
    • we got shots of the outside of the building, with the coach smoking before he goes in to train with Tanay
  • Directing
    • this time we got much more involved as directors, demonstrating to Tanay what we wanted him to do 

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Feedback


  • Sound
    • there are issues with the sound, and it is a little difficult to hear the dialogue
    • there is the loud wind sound outside the building
    • but, the ambient sound of the tennis balls in the other courts came out nicely
  • Costume
    • the costumes are realistic looking, and work very well
  • Acting
    • Tanay really looks like he's playing tennis, achieves verisimilitude
    • The acting during the dialogue is good, Tanay seems really frustrated
  • Positive feedback
    • one audience member picked up on the heavier themes from just this 45 second clip, thinking it could be about the difficulties and pressure of professional sport
    • people like the shot variety and angles


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Tuesday, 2 April 2019

ROUGH CUT 1



This is the first full rough cut of our film opening The Journey, with credits and idents.

Originally we wanted to have the jogging cross-cut throughout, but when we tried it made it extremely hard to follow what was happening, as it looked like Tanay was out jogging, and then was also playing tennis at the same time, so we removed the jogging we had cross-cut throughout the opening.


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Feedback
Upload the version with the cross-cutting that made it difficult to follow
Get audience feedback

Idents:

  • Maw Productions - too short, add toyCo ident
  • Red Films - sound needs fixing (hiss) add music
  • Journey Films - cannot read the paper, looks too much like it's part of the film, the paper doesn't work. better lighting, things going into suitcase, when bag is dropped and spilt open, picked up, on ground says Journey Films
  • fade to black, fade up from black - more conventional for social realist
Titles:
use this post for help
  • Font - too simple, make company name in upper case, make names bigger than the rest
  • could use sans serif for non-names
  • add film title
  • more cast names (with, introducing, featuring)
  • Harriet B. - stands out, no reason why it is written like that
make post with all titles, font, case, size, reasoning


Sound:
  • There is no sound in the first scene, no diegetic, Foley or ambient - unnatural. Sound of footsteps and packing - get sound of cars going past, a dog barking. Add to verisimilitude
  • sound of Cathy sighing needs to be louder
  • jogging - exaggerate breathing and footsteps 
  • don't include music unless you have a shot of switching it on - music when he is jogging must be lower
  • camera wind sound - have to rebuild audio
  • all sound has to be louder
  • music does not work at all
  • audio is not synced up

Editing:

  • need to trim wiping face shot of tear, because otherwise it looks like she's just wiping her face
  • packing scene drags on
  • training scene does not need to be linear chronologically - put in shots of him hitting the ball. Acting is not super convincing so this will help with maintaining verisimilitude
  • use shot of convo from other side
  • transition to jogging is very episodic, not smooth - fade needs to be quicker (maybe try a cross-fade, audio-bridge (start next scene audio before end of scene)
  • Start jogging scene with extreme long shot
  • PACING - needs to be quicker, shorter takes or cut some out
  • keep bits of guy in car shorter - threat of danger, foreshadowing - even hybridity style (verging on horror e.g. Dead Man's Shoes), make film more widely appealing
  • speed up car (maybe add gear clunk sound) - add engine sound
  • shot is very bright, keep shots of driver short
  • shaking camera - cut off end of ELS jogging
  • can see jogger from inside the car
  • speed up car
  • could make 2 stopping events - show determination. taking breath is too long
  • can cross cut between accident and hospital (flashing back to trauma)
  • ENDING - too abrupt, maybe hands bring gripped, or his eyes shutting again

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Saturday, 16 February 2019

Music update

A review of the second attempt at the packing scene showed us that we needed different music - the music we were using was very repetitive, but got the tone right.
Using the same chords, but a different finger picking pattern, I created this music to use in future cuts



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Friday, 15 February 2019

SAMPLE SCENE 2 Packing scene - 2nd attempt

This is the 2nd attempt at filming the scene where the tennis player's partner (Cathy) is leaving him



CHANGES

  • Much more set dressing:
    • tennis equipment is placed throughout the room
    • photos of the couple and the tennis team have been added for verisimilitude
    • female beauty products and jewellery were placed on the surface in front of the mirror
    • stereotypically female books were placed on one side of the bed, and stereotypically male ones on the other
    • the wardrobe was changed so that there is a clear divide between men's and women's clothes
    • a larger suitcase that is more realistic for a permanent move
  • Character creation had more detail:
    • we prepared a business suit (black trousers, smart shoes with modest heel, shirt and a blazer)
    • and a long, smart looking coat for when they leave the house
    • a watch, something teenagers do not usually wear
    • modest make-up (lip gloss and mascara)
  • More directing for the acting:
    • there was more demonstration of the actions (e.g. wiping the tear away)
    • there were issues in following direction with the actress previously playing the tennis player's partner (saying she felt uncomfortable in front of the camera) so a change in cast was a good idea
  • new shots:
    • close-ups of the set dressing
    • shot of the suitcase being slammed onto the bed so that we can attempt an almost match cut from the joggers foot landing on the ground



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FEEDBACK




  • Genre/target audience:
    • the people we asked all though it was aimed at teenagers, though one though the target age would up to 20 - this could be because the lead of this scene is played by a teenager, though we have gone to a lot of effort to dress the character so that they seem older
  • Improvements
    • the sound editing has clear issues - make the ambient sound quieter and the music louder
    • the lighting got mixed reactions - one said it seemed good, the other not realistic
      • we did use the lighting to create some shadow on the face of the lead as she wipes a tear to show the gloominess, but the rest is the lighting we had available, which is the natural lighting of the room
  • Positive feedback
    • everyone said that the music fit
    • there was no confusion as to what the narrative was - it was clear that she was leaving
    • no one said the set dressing seemed posed or unreal - it fits in
    • the genre guess was never far from accurate, but we did not expect teenagers to be able to guess if it was a social realist film

  • on recording audio (google details) - noise reduction in FCPX - reduce background hiss
  • dutch angle, varying focus and set dressing good (first shot)
  • trim hand opening cupboard door - pauses unnaturally
  • maybe trim door and keys in post box
  • maybe quicker cross cut between crying bits to make it more convincing as you can't see tears
    • do not want to lose verisimilitude. Maybe get 2 shots of her wiping face, not continuous shot - loses convincingness as its continuous
    • slight continuity breach between hand wiping face in the 2 shots
    • start music when she is holding the picture
  • ring, earrings and office clothing good (power point embedded to show all things added)
  • lighting is bad, lense might have been blurry. quite dark except for bright zones
  • maybe try some non-linear editing? or don't as in rough and final cut all is cross-cut with jogging
  • focus work - some is bad some is good
  • about blur - see if sharpening tools in final cut
    • maybe shorten takes or transition/cross them over to disguise
  • maybe film a drop of water falling onto picture, very tight focus, to show tears
  • maybe bring clang in earlier when she drops the keys then trim take slightly 
  • trim unnecessary movements so time
  • for second instrument ask music teacher what instrument she thinks is the second one in Tyrannosaur 
    • ask if students play is
    • direct them to record long, sad notes and then record
MAIN ISSUES:
sound and out of focus shots
music could be better - the music is a little dull - look at Tyrannosaur and spacing between notes and pacing, use 2 instruments - better simulacrum 

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Music update


A review of the second attempt at the packing scene showed us that we needed different music - the music we were using was very repetitive, but got the tone right.
Using the same chords, but a different finger picking pattern, I created this music to use in future cuts



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Monday, 7 January 2019

BTS DIRECTING sample scene 3, jogging and car crash




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SAMPLE SCENE 3 better jogging and car crash


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For this sample scene I included:

  • diegetic sound
  • I would like to recreate a similar background music I have used in this sample scene (maybe using garage band + a tutorial video)
  • natural lighting
  • shaky/handheld shots which you find in social realist movies like Tyrannosaur
  • tracking shot to signify Tanay is the central protagonist
  • Extreme Long Shot
  • Close Up
  • Long Shot
  • Tilting/Panning shot
  • it was filmed handheld form a car
  • the panting is Foley sound found on the website freesound (copyright free) because the noise from the car and wind made the audio form the clips unusable

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FEEDBACK

  • include titles
  • there is shading at the top of the frame in the first shot form where the top of the car window is
  • include more takes of Tanay running (shot variety, static shots etc.)
    • shots of his feet, POV shots, in front/behind etc.
  • the image is blurry/pixelated
  • the drumbeat sounds like muffled ambient sound, not a drum
  • the patch on the arm of the jacket (the jacket in general) doesn't fit - make the character more clear through costume/set dressing
    • can create a character that seems careless
    • person in business clothes, holding briefcase, papers full, fumbling for key, coffee and on phone - busy, stressed and distracted, likely to be in an accident 
    • body language, costume, do not necessarily have to see a face
    • would add to verisimilitude 
  • be more careful with where/when sad music plays
  • there's no real buildup to the climactic car crash
    • get frontal OTS shot of the car coming up 
    • Tanay could be listening to music - explanation as to why he doesn't heat the car (and would add more verisimilitude)
  • the sound - theres the sound of glass shattering but then theres no damage to the car
    • we didn't inlaced a shot of Tanay lying on the ground and smoke coming out of thecae because it seemed unrealistic and looked silly
    • remove glass shattering sound
  • The bleak deep field of focus for the tilting down shot works to show the trees, but shallow field of focus would work better afterwards (don't want be cutting between shots with different fields of focus too much)

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Wednesday, 19 December 2018

SAMPLE SCENE 2 Packing scene - 1st attempt



This is the scene where the Tennis player's partner is leaving him

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Feedback

  • Mise-en-scene
    • include tennis equipment in the background (racket, bag, water bottle)
    • passport (shot of it being put in the bag)
    • photos of the couple together and the team (have partner pick them up then put them down again, angrily)
    • panning shots of props
    • in wardrobe have clear split of his/her side
    • have a larger suitcase, get a shot of Cathy grabbing everything from one side of the wardrobe and putting it in the suitcase
  • Acting
    • include clearer demonstrations for the actor/actress
    • make it angrier and sadder
      • aggressively throwing clothes into the bag
      • slamming down the photos
      • get a closeup of her face (expression)
    • do a 'final look' around the house (living/kitchen) - more realistic and chance to include more mise-en-scene for exposition
  • Editing
    • bit at the start has very fast-paced editing, but you can't really see the shots because its so fast
    • get some more ELSs to use for establish shots (closer and closer to the house, similar to in Psycho
    • Get shots of the wife entering the car and slamming the door


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Tuesday, 20 November 2018

SAMPLE SCENE 1 bad jogging and tennis

(SAM'S WORK)
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Here we see how I recorded and created the background music for our film opening. It's a melody on the guitar with notes that are several seconds apart just like in Tyrannosaur.

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(MY WORK)
Review notes:


  • The jogging is not realistic (takes away from verisimilitude)
    • get involved as director and demonstrate
  • Use stabiliser 
  • See if actor can grow a beard to make him look older
  • Add sound of heavy panting for running
  • POV GoPro shots of running
  • Add water to make it look like sweat on the protagonist (for verisimilitude)
  • Bring towels to show tennis player wiping sweat off of himself
  • Try and film the final cut before the end of autumn (colours show up nicely on camera)
  • not enough shots
  • not enough shot variety
  • bring water bottle to make Tanay look sweaty
  • create a coach character - verisimilitude
  • get sound of tennis balls 
  • create dialogue
  • get shots of Tanay warming up
  • see if you can get someone to play tennis with him



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Monday, 12 November 2018

PODCAST2: Sample scene update and genre conventions research

in this weekly podcast we discuss:

  • specific genre convention research and more films for analysis
  • updates on shoot on Sunday (props cast, shots)
  • review of sample scene this week
  • audience research




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