Showing posts with label pre-production work. Show all posts
Showing posts with label pre-production work. Show all posts

Thursday, 4 April 2019

EVALUATION QUESTION 3 production skills

How did your production skills develop throughout this project?

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What I cover in this post:

  • Web series made on how to use FCPX, showing development over time
  • descriptions of how we improved over preliminary exercises and sample scenes
  • summaries of the issues we faced and how we developed our skills to overcome them (casing issues, acting, time)
  • set dressing advances
  • BTS showing our director skills improving

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Creative use of technologies:

For creative use of technologies, I made a web series on FCPX TechTips, in the form of a youtube tutorial series:

Episode 1

This is a demonstration of how our initial basic editing was done using FCPX

  • importing footage from a portable hard drive
  • creating libraries, events and projects
  • inserting clips to the timeline
  • cutting, detaching audio, other basics
  • saving 
  • publishing to the web


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Episode 2

When we started editing more scenes we used some more advanced effects

  • inserting Foley sound
  • sound effects
  • transitions (cut to black, fade to black)
  • audiobridge
  • music


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Episode 3

When I filmed my evaluation question 2 creative 'who wants to be a millionaire' I used a green screen and needed to se even more technical effects in FCPX
  • green screen
  • screen recording
  • keyer
  • position of clips
  • layering

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Episode 4

Whilst editing another rough cut, I had some difficulty with adding transitions to titles in FCPX
  • adding titles to a project
  • font and size
  • blade tool (short cuts)
  • cmd + Z
  • transitions (in and out)
  • making transitions work on only titles


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Preliminary Exercise

One of the earliest productions we worked on was a preliminary exercise in continuity editing. Our early production skills were very basic, and this was an introduction to more ways in which we can create meaning in a text using different editing, directing, camera and acting techniques


Task
Practice continuity editing by filming someone walking down a corridor, entering a room and interacting with someone in it



Techniques we practiced using
  • shot reverse shot
  • match on action
  • 180 degree rule
  • whip pan
  • focus push
  • panning shot
  • tilt
  • basic lighting techniques
  • we also made a brief shot list
  • dutch angle

What we didn't have
  • call sheet
  • script
  • tripod/monopod
  • dolly
  • props
  • stabiliser
  • microphone 
  • mood board

What I learned 
  • body language is as important as dialogue
  • director needs to be clear/may need to demonstrate
  • shot lists make it easier
  • shooting in reverse order 
  • continuity (eg turning out lights) must be payed attention to
  • how to use manual focus
  • get lots of footage (often of the same scene) from different angles/distances
  • always try and jump at least 2 shot distances (eg extreme long shot to close up), other wise it looks like a continuity error
  • see what footage looks like with and without lighting
  • a script would be helpful

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Continuous editing v. Discontinuity editing
Continuity editing uses techniques which immerse the audience in the media text, make it smooth and show events as they happen in chronological order. Discontinuity editing however makes the audience acutely aware that they are watching an artificial text which has been constructed, and uses techniques such as jump cuts and the breaking of the 180 degree rule which take away from audience immersion.
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Early sample scenes

Our first sample scene was very short, it was of our protagonist jogging and playing tennis.
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How our technical skills developed:
  • a lot of footage was shaky - thought to bring a stabiliser next time we would film
  • for more shot variety, use a GoPro to get POV shots of the protagonist (using accessories to attach it to his head)
  • get more shots and more shot variety next time
  • record sound of things like panting and feet running whilst there for verisimilitude
  • get even more involved as a director to show how you want things to happen - the running in this scene is very unrealistic
  • bring a shot list/call sheet for future shoots
  • think of things you could do once you're their - e.g. getting some training shots of him warming up would have added to verisimilitude
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Our second sample scene was shot inside, which brought more issues with it. This is the scene where the protagonist's partner (Cathy) is leaving him.


Issues:
  • the hand opening the cupboard has lots of short takes, so fast that you can't really make out what is happening, and it takes away from audience immersion because its so disorienting
  • include a master shot or ELS
  • shots of the partner leaving and getting in the car would help with verisimilitude 
  • nowhere near enough set dressing, the space in the room wasn't used nearly enough
  • Mise-en-scene missing:
    • include tennis equipment in the background (racket, bag, water bottle)
    • passport (shot of it being put in the bag)
    • photos of the couple together and the team (have partner pick them up then put them down again, angrily)
    • panning shots of props
    • in wardrobe have clear split of his/her side
    • have a larger suitcase, get a shot of Cathy grabbing everything from one side of the wardrobe and putting it in the suitcase
  • There were still issues with directing, so more demonstration was needed next time
Progress since the last sample scene:
  • This time we brought a call sheet and shot list
  • we used a stabiliser for the panning shots
  • we improvised some of the shots looking at the space we had and thinking of ways to be more creative in it
  • a lot more shot variety to choose from in editing
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Later sample scenes


This is the 2nd attempt at filming the scene where the tennis player's partner (Cathy) is leaving him.

 
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Progress since the last attempt:

  • There was much more involvement as a director, demonstrating to the actress what I wanted her to do
  • even more shot variety was used
  • a call sheet and shot list was used
  • much more set dressing:
    • tennis equipment is placed throughout the room
    • photos of the couple and the tennis team have been added for verisimilitude
    • female beauty products and jewellery were placed on the surface in front of the mirror
    • stereotypically female books were placed on one side of the bed, and stereotypically male ones on the other
    • the wardrobe was changed so that there is a clear divide between men's and women's clothes
    • a larger suitcase that is more realistic for a permanent move
  • manual focus was used in some shots (varying focus push/pull)
  • There were no overwhelmingly disorienting short takes
Issues:
  • There are sound issues with this sample scene
  • slight continuity error - the hand pauses on the cupboard door 
  • The lighting was difficult to work with, but there wasn't any more we could do to improve it
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Flexibility and Overcoming Issues Faced

one of the key skills I had to work on throughout the production was flexibility: actors cancelled on shoots a lot, the weather was sometimes bad so filming had to be pushed back repeatedly. We had to find ways to overcome these difficulties.

Cast and Filming:

  • Originally the partner of the protagonist was going to be another man, because we wanted to include non-heteronormative representation, taking influence from films like My Beautiful Laundrette, or Withnail and I. But because we had already cast the protagonist and filmed several scenes with him, it would be practically too difficult to reshoot these all again with a different actor, as he did not want play the role if the character wasn't heterosexual. We had to change the casting of the partner to a female, because we had not filmed any scenes with them yet.

  • with the actress initially playing the role of the partner, there were issues with following direction, and said she felt uncomfortable on camera, despite agreeing to film. This lead to a cast change, and a reshoot, which was frustrating, but definitely the right decision as the second attempt at filming the packing scene was far more successful than the first.

  • Sometimes the actors had trouble following direction: in the car crash scene, we had to reshoot the protagonist's reaction countless times, demonstrating repeatedly the way he should react without making it look too fake or awkward. After about 45 minutes of this, we decided to change the shot to a close-up reaction, and showing the car wheels stopping suddenly.

  • For the hospital scene, we asked the nurses at our school if we could film in their office, and they were really helpful and enthusiastic, offering to bring in their old work clothes and move the beds around the room. They also helped us edit the script to make it sound more medically accurate. But filming in the school nurse office was difficult, as at lunch times we had to repeatedly cancel because it was too full, but we eventually filmed after school.

Set dressing:
  • at the start we forgot to bring in bits of costume and set dressing, which took away from verisimilitude
  • to overcome this we made detailed plans for each shoot (linked below)
  • One of the prime examples of this is the set dressing in the packing scene:
    • initially there was barely any set dressing, when we re-filmed we added (for verisimilitude):
      • female beauty products on the dresser
      • a clear divide between men's and women's clothes in the wardrobe
      • photos of the main couple, and Tanay's tennis team
      • tennis equipment throughout the room
      • a larger suitcase (so it looked like she was actually leaving)
        Early sample scene - lack of detail in set dressing
        Final cut - clear divide between male and female wardrobe,
         shows they are living together and she is leaving

Health and safety:
  • because one of our scenes involves a car crash we had to make risk assessments to avoid injury
  • To make sure no one actually got hit by a car, we made clear markers on the road for where the jogger should stop, and where the car should. The car wasn't going faster than 10km/h. If an accident were to occur, the nearest hospital was a 10 minute drive away, as a safety net.
  • seatbelts were worn at all times
  • there were no injuries or accidents which occurred
The Facebook Groupchat
Other:

  • General confidence was a real issue for me at the start of this journey, but as I did more research and practices confidence grew. In the first few months I had difficulty with editing vodcasts because of this confidence issue, but as we made more sample scenes and we could see our own improvement my confidence grew and I became more able to direct actors effectively and edit vodcasts/podcasts
  • Early camera skills were really shaky, and a lot of footage had issues with focus/shake, but as we got more confident with the hardware this improved (more on this in evaluation question 4)
  • Group communication was an early issue, but using social media (facebook messenger) we got more involved in sharing ideas through calls and messages, and a group chat was made with the whole cast in it so that we could make sure everyone had all the information they needed (including costume, time/place, scripts etc.)

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BTS
We made behind the scenes videos for some shoots to show evidence of directing. As time goes on our directing skills improved as we became more clear in our descriptions and demonstrations for the actors


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(SAM'S WORK)
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This is Sam's creative use of technologies covering the same topic
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Wednesday, 3 April 2019

TECH TIPS episode 4 - FCPX Titles and transitions

Whilst editing another rough cut, I had some difficulty with adding transitions to titles in FCPX


  • adding titles to a project
  • font and size
  • blade tool (short cuts)
  • cmd + Z
  • transitions (in and out)
  • making transitions work on only titles
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Saturday, 16 February 2019

Music update

A review of the second attempt at the packing scene showed us that we needed different music - the music we were using was very repetitive, but got the tone right.
Using the same chords, but a different finger picking pattern, I created this music to use in future cuts



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Friday, 15 February 2019

SAMPLE SCENE 2 Packing scene - 2nd attempt

This is the 2nd attempt at filming the scene where the tennis player's partner (Cathy) is leaving him



CHANGES

  • Much more set dressing:
    • tennis equipment is placed throughout the room
    • photos of the couple and the tennis team have been added for verisimilitude
    • female beauty products and jewellery were placed on the surface in front of the mirror
    • stereotypically female books were placed on one side of the bed, and stereotypically male ones on the other
    • the wardrobe was changed so that there is a clear divide between men's and women's clothes
    • a larger suitcase that is more realistic for a permanent move
  • Character creation had more detail:
    • we prepared a business suit (black trousers, smart shoes with modest heel, shirt and a blazer)
    • and a long, smart looking coat for when they leave the house
    • a watch, something teenagers do not usually wear
    • modest make-up (lip gloss and mascara)
  • More directing for the acting:
    • there was more demonstration of the actions (e.g. wiping the tear away)
    • there were issues in following direction with the actress previously playing the tennis player's partner (saying she felt uncomfortable in front of the camera) so a change in cast was a good idea
  • new shots:
    • close-ups of the set dressing
    • shot of the suitcase being slammed onto the bed so that we can attempt an almost match cut from the joggers foot landing on the ground



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FEEDBACK




  • Genre/target audience:
    • the people we asked all though it was aimed at teenagers, though one though the target age would up to 20 - this could be because the lead of this scene is played by a teenager, though we have gone to a lot of effort to dress the character so that they seem older
  • Improvements
    • the sound editing has clear issues - make the ambient sound quieter and the music louder
    • the lighting got mixed reactions - one said it seemed good, the other not realistic
      • we did use the lighting to create some shadow on the face of the lead as she wipes a tear to show the gloominess, but the rest is the lighting we had available, which is the natural lighting of the room
  • Positive feedback
    • everyone said that the music fit
    • there was no confusion as to what the narrative was - it was clear that she was leaving
    • no one said the set dressing seemed posed or unreal - it fits in
    • the genre guess was never far from accurate, but we did not expect teenagers to be able to guess if it was a social realist film

  • on recording audio (google details) - noise reduction in FCPX - reduce background hiss
  • dutch angle, varying focus and set dressing good (first shot)
  • trim hand opening cupboard door - pauses unnaturally
  • maybe trim door and keys in post box
  • maybe quicker cross cut between crying bits to make it more convincing as you can't see tears
    • do not want to lose verisimilitude. Maybe get 2 shots of her wiping face, not continuous shot - loses convincingness as its continuous
    • slight continuity breach between hand wiping face in the 2 shots
    • start music when she is holding the picture
  • ring, earrings and office clothing good (power point embedded to show all things added)
  • lighting is bad, lense might have been blurry. quite dark except for bright zones
  • maybe try some non-linear editing? or don't as in rough and final cut all is cross-cut with jogging
  • focus work - some is bad some is good
  • about blur - see if sharpening tools in final cut
    • maybe shorten takes or transition/cross them over to disguise
  • maybe film a drop of water falling onto picture, very tight focus, to show tears
  • maybe bring clang in earlier when she drops the keys then trim take slightly 
  • trim unnecessary movements so time
  • for second instrument ask music teacher what instrument she thinks is the second one in Tyrannosaur 
    • ask if students play is
    • direct them to record long, sad notes and then record
MAIN ISSUES:
sound and out of focus shots
music could be better - the music is a little dull - look at Tyrannosaur and spacing between notes and pacing, use 2 instruments - better simulacrum 

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Music update


A review of the second attempt at the packing scene showed us that we needed different music - the music we were using was very repetitive, but got the tone right.
Using the same chords, but a different finger picking pattern, I created this music to use in future cuts



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Thursday, 31 January 2019

STORYBOARD



This is our full storyboard, colour photos by Sam, photocopies by me.
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Friday, 11 January 2019

PODCAST 6 review of jogging scene, 2 upcoming shoots, eval qs

In this week podcast we discuss:

  • review of the jogging scene we filmed/edited over Christmas 
  • plans for shoot of hospital scene today
  • plans for tennis and packing scene reshoots on Sunday
  • initial brainstorming for creative ways of answering the evaluation questions





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Sunday, 23 December 2018

PLAN FOR SHOOT hospital scene

Casting
Tanay Saigal
The protagonist/tennis player
He is needed from:
11:40-12:30
3:15-4:30


Hannah Ni Leigh Evans
The partner of Tanay
She is needed from:
11:40-12:30
3:15-4:30


Sam Lau
The coach
He is needed from:
11:40-12:30
3:15-4:30


Harriet Barlow
Tanay's teammate
She is needed form:
11:40-12:30
3:15-4:30


School nurse
Nurse
She is needed from:
11:40-12:30
3:15-4:30



Location
The school nurses' office in our school, we had to ask the nurses for permission and we gave them a brief of what we want to do - we had to be flexible for shooting because if a student came in the space had to be free
We eventually filmed after school so we had more time to get all the shots we wanted
Date:
27/12/18 - cancelled because actor could not make it
28/12/18 - cancelled because nurses office was occupied
07/01/19 - "
11/01/19 - "
14/01/19
Time:
11:40-12:30
3:15-4:30


Equipment

  • Sony A58
  • Tripod
  • Dolly

Props
  • printed out picture of brain scans
  • folder
  • bandages
  • blanket
  • trophy
  • cigarettes/packet - we included this in the training scene because it made more sense
  • Nurses outfit
  • Coach's costume

Shot List

  • POV shots of Tanay waking up (hand-held)
  • MS 2 shot of teammate and partner next to Tanay in bed
  • CU BE of Tanay's face waking up
  • ECU hand nervously tapping on trophy
  • MLS 3 shot of coach arriving
  • shot reverse shot sequence for dialogue
  • CU HA of trophy being put on bedside table
  • MLS 3 shot of all dialogue
  • OTS MLS of nurse coming in and her dialogue 
  • MS of nurse's dialogue
  • CU OTS of nurse  pointing at brain scan images in folder
  • CU of coach's reaction to tennis news
  • try 
  • try a few different shots for reactions to the news
  • CU of various things in the space (looking at watch, stethoscope, bandages etc.)

Screenplay


I showed the screenplay to the nurse, and she suggested edits for her lines to make them more realistic, those are the ones used in the final cut
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Monday, 17 December 2018

PODCAST 5: upcoming shoot, cast, BTS, upcoming essay

In this podcast we discuss:

  • the scenes we are going to shoot (jogging scene)
  • update on cast
  • some behind the scenes
  • essay practice about film industry and comparison between Warp and Working Title

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Saturday, 15 December 2018

Packing scene storyboard





this is the storyboard for the scene where the partner of the tennis player is packing up their things and moving out
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Monday, 19 November 2018

LOCATION SCOUTING

Over the course of this week we each looked at some different locations for filming the jogging and packing scene, before deciding on the ones you see in the sample scenes. We took either a Sony A58 or used our phone cameras.
The tennis training scene will be filmed in Tanay's tennis club, and for the nurse scene we will try and film in the nurses' office at our school when they aren't busy. We chose a street near our school with forest area on one side for the jogging scene because it was very accessible and not very busy, and my house for the packing scene.
These are the locations we discarded, either because they were too far away, too busy (risk of continuity errors with people walking past), lack of space for cameras:




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Friday, 16 November 2018

PLAN FOR SHOOT packing scene



Casting
Hannah 
Leigh
Cathy - the partner of the tennis player
He is needed from:
2:00-3:00 
4:00-7:00


Location
Harriet’s house
Date:
17/11/18 - this happened, but after there were issues with it so we changed the cast and reshot
01/12/18 - there was unexpected snow and the roads were too icy to drive on safely
13/01/19
Time:
2:00-3:00
4:00-7:00

Equipment

  • Sony A58
  • Tripod
  • Dolly
  • SD card

Props
  • Tennis equipment lying about the room
  • Photos of the couple together, and of the tennis team (in frames)
  • Feminine beauty products (makeup, perfume, hairbrush) to put on wardrobe
  • Women’s clothes and men’s clothes (to hang in wardrobe, clear line down the middle)
  • Large suitcase
  • Keys
  • Car
  • Toilet bag

Costumes
Cathy:
  • Smart business clothes (black blazer and blue or white shirt, trousers or skirt depends on what actress already owns)
  • Laced shoes
  • modest makeup (lip gloss)
  • Jewellery (ring, earrings)
  • Watch 

Shot List
  • Close-up suitcase being slammed onto bed
  • ECU zips being open-end and closed
  • Shots of the suitcase being opened and closed
  • CU of hands opening wardrobe door
  • CU of Cathy’s face (camera inside wardrobe)
  • MS or clothes being taken out - pan putting them in the suitcase
  • OTS of clothes being put in suitcase
  • MCU of Cathy picking up photos and wiping away a tear
  • CU of tear being wiped away
  • CU of hand picking up and putting dow photo
  • CU of putting items on dresser into toilet bag
  • Master shot of items being put into suitcase
  • ECU of shoes being tied
  • ECU of keys locking door
  • ECU of keys being put in post box
  • CU of car door slamming
  • Shots form inside the car of Cathy getting in
  • ECU of car keys being put in

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Wednesday, 14 November 2018

PLAN FOR SHOOT jogging and car crash

(SAM'S WORK)
Casting
Samuel Lau
Driver of the car
He is needed from 15:15 - 16:45

Tanay Saigal
Professional Tennis player/protagonist, Jogger who gets hit by the car
He is needed from 15:15 - 16:45

Location
Setting: Forest in Cents
Date
17/11/18 First sample scene (lack of verisimilitude, lack of shot variety)
03/01/19 Poor image quality, mistake in set dressing and lack of shot variety
15/01/19 Tanay unable to come
23/01/19 ''
03/02/19 ''
05/02/19 Sam fell ill and we couldn't find a new cast member who could drive in time
Time15:15 - 16:45

Equipment

  • Sony A58 x2
  • GoPro
  • accessories for the GoPro
  • tripod
  • dolly

Props
  • Car
  • Water Bottle
  • Smartphone
  • Headphones (white, apple)
  • set dressing for car
    • fast food wrappers (subway)
    • bank statement/bill
    • bar wrappers
    • coat in back seat

Costume
Tanay:
  • Jumper, warm, practical
  • jogging trousers
  • headphones
  • trainers
  • white socks
Driver:
  • business clothes, smart
  • pin striped blue shirt
  • black blazer
  • blue tie
  • ID card
  • pen in pocket
  • coffee cup in hand (Starbucks to go)
  • briefcase 
  • papers in hand
  • plastic wallets/folders (plain colours - blue/black/red)
  • car keys
  • work shoes (black leather)
  • black socks
  • belt (black, simple, business)
  • phone with contact set to "office"

Dialogue
Driver says mild cuss as the coffee drops ("crap")

Shots
  • LS, tracking shot of Tanay jogging with hood up
  • shot of Tanay stopping to breathe and removing hood (he has headphones in)
  • OTS shot of Tanay taking out smartphone to change song
  • CU of his feet running (and hitting ground so we can do an almost match cut with the suitcase)
  • try an get a match cut of him drinking water
  • Wiping sweat (same as training scene)
  • MLS of driver walking towards car (holding coffee to go, briefcase, folder, phone) in font of coffee place or business offices
  • MCU of coffee falling
  • CU HA of coffee hitting the ground and splashing 
  • MCU of driver getting in car
  • ECU turning the car on 
  • a shot from inside the car
  • clumsily throwing things onto car seat
  • Over the shoulder shot of driver looking for water bottle
  • Shot from outside the car (Passenger seat, camera out the window) of Tanay crossing the street
  • CU of Tanay's face when he sees the car approaching
  • Shot of phone screen lighting up in car with "office" as contact name
  • MCU from inside the car of driver fumbling for phone, Tanay is seen running up ahead through the windshield